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Stand by me (Free verse) by Cougarchic

Please stand by me For I need someone to trust Why can't they see? My state of mind is a real disgust Please let me be For I am a mess I'm a site to be seen I don't want to press I want to be able to trust I need you to listen Cause I'm just about to bust Please stand by me For I really want to learn You may need to wait Till I can heal my burn I hate this helpless state I feel I may go crazy How can I make you see that the trouble is inside of me? That is why we always fight For I think you shouldn't know my plight For if I tell you all that’s dear It's all the consequences that I fear

richa 14-Jan-04/10:03 AM
A little too much silliness really. 'My state of mind is a real disgust'???!. I don't care if it does rhyme.




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