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New commandments (Free verse) by little_big_nose

Your extinct god Will bow down before me and call himself a fraud And tell your poor abused children that I will end the animosity I will be the one to set them free The new ten commandments go as follows He who prays, also wallows Tho shalt not commit a crime To buy your extinct god time Tho shall destroy all idols Tho shall burn every bible Tho shall dine in thy own mercy As soon as they can kill me Tho shall sin in my name And tho shall treat life as a game Tho shalt not rape thy mother Tho shalt not love thy brother For the final preparation To assure the restoration Tho shall sing for satan To give back all you have taken

SupremeDreamer 12-Jan-04/1:15 PM
your comment, not little big nose's poem




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