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Come sleep with me (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

Everything was like a living dream Swept away It was gone so abruptly It spawned a troubled mind with in me Ruining all perfection Ah I the dreamer woe is me For serenity does not pulse in my veins I can close my eyes draw in a deep breath And feel you here with me I feel you kiss me, I feel you touch me, and I feel you hold me Where can I go when I want what I had And it can’t be found in a conscious state I’m desperate for you, to feel you, to see you Tell me you'll hold me because I miss you Believe me when I say I'd rather be with you Because you are superior to all others

nothingtoanyone 8-Jan-04/6:53 PM
I like the way you put that feeling to words.




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