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BreakBeat TimeTravel (Free verse) by nentwined

Breakbeat time travel--on the flip flip flop down skip the heart skips and in- between moments the mind skips between moments; history of the victors lives on-- he lives on long beyond the lives of those in his moments, his moments in- between moments; history and future live on, so malleable, the moments between moments so malleable that the history and future he knows may never have happened though he visits them daily he disavows all knowledge not his, and his changes, time break travel

Don-Quixote 7-Jan-04/9:03 AM
Well, its a poetic word.. (well, personally, I think hallmark has ruined it)

Hell, you could make a poem by just writing "moments" and nothing else, and have a good chance of getting away with it.

heres a contribution to your fascination:

moments
between golden splashes
and amber tears
is where peace is found
before the dreaded eye sting
and the smell of cleanliness.

Oh, and heres a 7.. it was funny I think, though I'm guessing that wasn't exactly your goal. :P




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