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BreakBeat TimeTravel (Free verse) by nentwined

Breakbeat time travel--on the flip flip flop down skip the heart skips and in- between moments the mind skips between moments; history of the victors lives on-- he lives on long beyond the lives of those in his moments, his moments in- between moments; history and future live on, so malleable, the moments between moments so malleable that the history and future he knows may never have happened though he visits them daily he disavows all knowledge not his, and his changes, time break travel

Don-Quixote 7-Jan-04/8:47 AM
I second that. Because this poem has guaranteed nentwined to face molestation charges from "moments".

You know, we could of done this mathematically.. Loop 1sec + 1.





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