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BreakBeat TimeTravel (Free verse) by nentwined

Breakbeat time travel--on the flip flip flop down skip the heart skips and in- between moments the mind skips between moments; history of the victors lives on-- he lives on long beyond the lives of those in his moments, his moments in- between moments; history and future live on, so malleable, the moments between moments so malleable that the history and future he knows may never have happened though he visits them daily he disavows all knowledge not his, and his changes, time break travel

nentwined 7-Jan-04/8:09 AM
I really can't spell break. that sucks.

one moment and I'll fix that. I'm just not sure which one (moment). la. ;)




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