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I smell coffee (Other) by Princess_Snowflake

I smell a strong smell of coffee floating around the air in here I am craving for coffee with a rich, strong taste I want to drink coffee with anything I want I cannot stop craving until I have a big taste of coffee from the tasty coffee beans It smells like pure Colombian and Arabica or espresso I smell coffee around here and want a big taste of it I want the taste in my mouth that would keep me asking for more and more I cannot smile without any coffee until I taste it I cannot be awake until I taste the coffee Why can't I have some? Why can't I crave for coffee? Why can't I pour myself some hot, delecious coffee in the morning? I smell coffee everyday and feel the taste in my tongue.

lastobelus 3-Jan-04/7:37 AM
Oh YES baby. This coffee, it VIBRATES? Seriously I don't care how many rules this poem breaks I love it. It is robust, exuberant, with an innocent aftertaste of blossoms, full of body. And full of metaphorical body, or at least i read it that way, but I'm just an old lech. I COULD NOT STOP thinking "blowjob" the whole way through. I WANT TO BE COFFEE!!!! Can I be coffee, can I please please? KEEP going snowflake, I think you are the next Princess Bukowski.




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