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Haiku 2004 (Haiku) by Princess_Snowflake

The new year is here When the things turn new And when we are respectful

lastobelus 3-Jan-04/7:29 AM
This is absolutely briliant. Though I suspect the use of "the" in line two was incidentall, and intended only to achieve sylable count, the result is nevertheles startlingly evocative.




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