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metaphorically speaking (Free verse) by somemorepoetry

You've been begging to leave Since you saw that tree Falling, falling, falling If it can move Why can't you Your roots are deep Your leaves are new Forgive me For wanting to cut you down And burn you I am cold You are warm

richa 2-Jan-04/12:51 PM
Starts and ends with a nice clear voice, but gets a bit confusing in the middle




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