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Fragment (Lyric) by goldfish

The lake a cathedral window Stained by the setting sun The loon a pensive mourner Whose requiem now is done The raft a restless baby Rocked in gentle arms The moon a watchful goddess In a vestry of the stars The dawn a voice from heaven Lighting the waves below

zapevaj 7-Aug-02/5:23 AM
Normally I hate rhyming poetry, but this is done very unobtrusively, and the metaphors are lovely.




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