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The wise (Free verse) by richa

It is with neither the symmetry of a wind facing rock, nor the art of a half-formed thought that you stand miles from us. You don't hold in your hand a butterfly cabbage white and let go, knowing your grasp is not waning. You just know that the still- water skies cut by its wings number more if not for you.

Everyone 30-Dec-03/3:36 AM
Care to share them with the rest of the group? In particular, what is the significance of the "wind facing rock" and the "cabbage white butterfly"? [HINT In order to obtain full marks, it is necessary to state why the rock is wind facing and why the butterfly is cabbage white]

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