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Lenola prays with a stiletto (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

Midnight creeps while Lenola quivers engulfed in the devils breath sulphurous and keen. Despite confessions and well-thumbed rosary, she remains squalid- eyeing her husbands stiletto. She quivers in odium; forsaken- guilt gnaws her senses as she begins to realize that Jesus's magic has long been depleted. Her discarded rosary remains on the last pew alongside her silver cross necklace. The jeweled hilt held in her hands instilled serenity. The blade replaced god as she drove it deep into the priest- elated by his blood savagely spilt upon her skin. Murder with a jeweled stiletto became her salvation.

Joe-joe 27-Dec-03/6:17 AM
Again this obsession with Jesus..it's absolutely amazing! Scoundrel? You're a panick...just can't resist being a wise-guy can you? That's ok, I kind of like that about you...and Dreamer as well....got to have an edge about you or you won't be any fun to hang with. Glad to hear the boy is doing well and that you're paying proper attention to your crafts. Later Joe




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