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Lenola prays with a stiletto (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

Midnight creeps while Lenola quivers engulfed in the devils breath sulphurous and keen. Despite confessions and well-thumbed rosary, she remains squalid- eyeing her husbands stiletto. She quivers in odium; forsaken- guilt gnaws her senses as she begins to realize that Jesus's magic has long been depleted. Her discarded rosary remains on the last pew alongside her silver cross necklace. The jeweled hilt held in her hands instilled serenity. The blade replaced god as she drove it deep into the priest- elated by his blood savagely spilt upon her skin. Murder with a jeweled stiletto became her salvation.

Joe-joe 26-Dec-03/7:16 PM
No no....I respect the boyscouts and would not dare equate them with the likes of you. I hope you're getting your shit together and are guiding your son in the right direction. It is an enormous responsibility you have....he is observing your every move and listening closely to every word that you utter. You only get one chance to get it right so make sure your attention is where it belongs and that your base of values is in tact. How's the music, acting and writing business going? I hope you're finding your way and growing up in the process. You certainly are a hard worker who has a passion for what he does. Your art is not my cup of tea but that's not to say it is without appeal. I wish you good luck.




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