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Existence (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

Like Stars I fall into the background Like love I think I lost myself Like everything I've ever known it disappeared eventually To exists where you don't want to Is like not existing at all But to exist where you want to and not to be wanted Is like not existing at all

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 6-Aug-02/10:51 PM
ThoughtfulSoul, can you not see the difference between a) being arrogant and b) saying something is shit? Have you ever said something was shit? Did it make your head go up your ass? If not, then realise that criticism does not equal childishness. If so, I suggest you make an appointment with your proctologist, Sir.




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