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You.. (Free verse) by Ariella

I dreamt about you last night, I know things will never be the same. Why is it TIME has no mercy? Especially to those who CHOOSE to blame? I subconsiously carry our every moment, Our memories were nothing but the best, But EVERYTIME i am reminded, I RELIVE the things I'd rather forget. I am haunted by our past Yet the future never looked so bright. But today I struggle to find my centre, And make sense of what I dreamt last night. Are you sending me ESP messages? Am i fooling myself of your ghost? Is it Taboo to have wanted your ALL? But NOT give up what I wanted most? Desicions........ TIME dragged on to circumstance, Once again another chapter to an end. I cant even call to say hi, let alone acknowledge you WERE my friend.

horus8 22-Dec-03/12:37 AM
Please, if you are going to give me a 5? Learn how to fucking spell. "subconscious" you twit. here's your five back, buy a dictionary.




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