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lost... (Free verse) by Tineke

First I was lost in an ocean of tears, cause you said you didn't love me anymore. But now... My heart is cold it's frozen... You can't reach me Nobody can reach me I am lost in my own world, a world without feelings, a world without love...

SupremeDreamer 18-Dec-03/8:18 AM
A journal is perfect for spewing out that emotional goo..

Or you can turn that goo into something that atleast resembles a poem.. which would require some "imagination"..

Then theres the heavy sarcasm and cynical approach, which atleast offers the possibility of inciting an occasional chuckle.

If all else fails, go hug your school counselor? SHED LOVE TO SEE YOUR JOURNAL *cough* I mean "poems"...




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