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lost... (Free verse) by Tineke

First I was lost in an ocean of tears, cause you said you didn't love me anymore. But now... My heart is cold it's frozen... You can't reach me Nobody can reach me I am lost in my own world, a world without feelings, a world without love...

SupremeDreamer 18-Dec-03/7:54 AM
ok, now if your going to write in self pity.. could you atleast TRY you know ATTEMPT to do it in an artistic and creative fashion or something??

This sounds like a fucking therapy session, or more like a public BOO-HOO-HOO classic cliche teenage "I'm lonely and unloved blah blah"

Fuck.. get a journal. And your from belgium? This might be the stupidest joke ever concieved and carried out, really now.

Whats next? The infamous internet suicide note?




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