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Winter Lands: I (Free verse) by http://bandgeek

Another winter, another home. Last winter, crisped through plowed lots to the bus stop. Artificial gaps in the snowbank, two feet across, served as meager public sidewalk. Uneven openings were trampled and kicked through the spattered gray bank next to bus route signs to expedite entry into a warm, musky haven of public transportation. Hoped for a few inches of fresh snow weekly to make soot blackened snow mountains “clean”. Not caring that come spring, warmer rains would reveal many horrors to unwitting pedestrian archeologists. Forgotten, but never lost; layers of salty sand, styrofoam coffee cups, bus transfer tickets, pink frozen vomit, faded mittens, condom wrappers. In that land, reassurance glowed every half hour. Plowtrucks’ yellow lights flickered into apartment rooms. Distant scraping sounded a friendly reminder: the safety of a city with parking bans.

The_Third_Isis 7-Dec-03/10:24 PM
Yikes soooo glad I'm no where near any of that till after xmas I caould harly handle california..with out a human fur coat a few blankets and alot of what wet dreams become a reality. I;30 am and the warm breeze is fluttering my satin robe...sigh keep your cats warm, and thanks for the well writen reminder of why I dont like real winter's. Best wishes to you and a hot apple cider my friend cheers.I need to sleep with only one silk sheet and no dry heat,that makes my nosebleed yuck. A 10 and to all a goood night!




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