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Saying of Love (Free verse) by UrbaneSavvy

A figment of imagination Yet still reality and Still wondering how I and you Turned into we Amazed at how the love we posess Can be so wonderfully complex and multiple And yet dwells in simplicity Under Waterheavy flows Of intimate desires We transpire Flooding our fields with devotion As our sun rays Reflects affection from our outer layers Full of emotions With love as our roots We gain success At our quest To maintain happiness.

The_Third_Isis 7-Dec-03/9:17 PM
ahhhh love,amore I've only tasted the ambrosia of this orchis/family but once [I mean the taste of love real love]it gave me asthenia.I am a godess so i recovered a bit quicker.I even lived in orcus because of it. My own creation..same birth mark distinguish from others characterize, make clear,boundary,mine. yet another century he is my bezel.Real love is eternal "Live as if you were to die tommorow.learn as if you were to live forever"
Mahatma Gandhi. this touched my diamond hard heart a 9




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