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They who would have me forget (Free verse) by BleedingRose

They tell me, "laugh". They tell me, "smile". They tell me, "pain fades after a while". "Turn your back". "Leave it behind". "Find solace in a joy of another kind". But I live for that grief. I live for that pain. That ache in my heart like an acid rain. Every second I mourn. Every second I cry. I give meaning to the losses of days gone by.

Jill Stockinger 2-Dec-03/2:48 PM
The real feeling comes through.
It comes across as a bit trite, but still
heart-felt.




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