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Existence (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

Like Stars I fall into the background Like love I think I lost myself Like everything I've ever known it disappeared eventually To exists where you don't want to Is like not existing at all But to exist where you want to and not to be wanted Is like not existing at all

ThoughtfulSoul 5-Aug-02/4:43 PM
u try to be so smart, maybe just maybe if u spent that much thought on ur own poetry it would be a little better




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