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A "sirius"makeover (Free verse) by The_Third_Isis

This LOVE goes back to antiquity You ended my life and yours a repeated phropesy. Our blood merged and sealead a forever heresy. This gene has passed down from generation to resurection- ancient prayers long forgoten, come to mind as i look at you.. the symbol of a petroglyphed eye this time, around you are again the sacred sirian number 8. I recall five and eight equals tweelve. One and twoo equal three trinity. I'am the third Isis, with out the need of itermediaris we still communicate with our inner mind, third eye principle. united our cosmic identity join us as one, sirian -conotation a "Lion Family" Dogma youve killed me, now you healed me. Ive been on the dark side of the moon too long. Born out of a fenomenal union, your father a bird headed god. You infant survivor of tribulations air/water/fire. Enlightened Bast/twin of Horus you now slumber on Isis lap. This gravitational pull, astronomic souls of old. Our sarcofogus blessed with starcore memories. I as before ions ago promise you my love. This is a promise sealed with forever, and ever my love,my twin, my sun..my moon...my me my you.

Don-Quixote 24-Nov-03/7:41 PM
h8's music? pretty good.. but his harmonica tunes? a reason to kill.

I have read all your poems, voted on them aswell, but didn't comment till this one- not sure why.

A writer improves his/her skill always- its constant. (but then again, some others live in denial? or quit poetry and start a 2000 pg. rose-diary)

En espanol? anglais, francaise et wallon je comprenez- pas espanol (and im very bad at reading/writing french or walloon.. speaking french? np. walloon? a mouthful to say the least.)




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