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Intersection (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I spot a hawk perched atop a stop sign. He probes my poll as I slow my approach to this cross in time. We gaze on gaze and weigh the ways our brains behave, I and this birdly friend of mine. When we brake our stare he takes to the air and I to my grinding line.

INTRANSIT 20-Nov-03/2:50 PM
the hawk was looking at the top of my head(poll) or "sizing me up"

gaze on gaze-- looked each other in the eye

grinding line-- straight ground transportation.

but do these things warrant a higher score? I know I shouldn't base everything on this rating chart, it's just convenient.

10-Q




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