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Missing you (Free verse) by kawakurdi

There are no clouds in the sky There is no mist in the sea These are my tears Crying for you. There is no wind blowing There is no autumn fall These are my breaths Whose every season is fall. I miss you as a sky Whose stars have left it I miss you as a forest Whose trees have fled I groan at night, I weep in the day Itis you I miss, for you I pray.

ShaNoN+960317485 20-Nov-03/6:04 AM
This i dont like from start to the end..i missed the point




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