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Existence (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

Like Stars I fall into the background Like love I think I lost myself Like everything I've ever known it disappeared eventually To exists where you don't want to Is like not existing at all But to exist where you want to and not to be wanted Is like not existing at all

Agemo-Z 5-Aug-02/11:11 AM
No, both those things are like existing. It's the existance known as AGONY, and it's quite common to some people. Are you so naive to think that all existence should be bright and rosy, or would you just rather not think about the starving children making your Nike shoes in China right now?




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