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Intersection (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I spot a hawk perched atop a stop sign. He probes my poll as I slow my approach to this cross in time. We gaze on gaze and weigh the ways our brains behave, I and this birdly friend of mine. When we brake our stare he takes to the air and I to my grinding line.

INTRANSIT 19-Nov-03/12:45 PM
admittedly, the assonance is a bit forced. Poll is also the top of the head.




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