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hello eternity (Free verse) by justjay

Hands made of ice- chills to my spine. My mind freezes- but I'm not cold. Words hit like a brick wall- harder then any punch could ever deliver. I do everything to forget- and nothing to remember. I would rather not remember- anything- then remember yesterday. Goodbye today- Hello eternity.

titan69 15-Nov-03/11:54 PM
like it! good feeling.put into the words




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