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A Sonnet for Barbara (Other) by PatColvin

While I was wondering just what it meant To find my love, to give someone my heart, I nearly gave up hope that God had sent Someone into this world who'd fit the part. A Girl who'd love me for the guy I am, A Woman worthy of my deepest love, A Beauty who would cling to me, her man, A Princess faithful to my Lord above. But now my doubts are gone. I've found in you Each one of these and ever so much more. And I'm convinced I've found the woman who I want to be my wife forevermore. So take this ring, my Barbara -- share my life! And be my Love, my Lady and my Wife. (Copyright Patrick A. Colvin, 2002)

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Aug-02/8:51 PM
Hey, Colvin, I doubt you're reading this, but I just thought you'd like to know I fucking hated this poeme. You must be so empty of personality that the only way you can continue to exist is to tell yourself that God loves you and Barbara loves you and christ you're pathetic can't you find some pleasure in existence without forcing other people to be your source of joy?




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