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paint me a poem (try 2) (Free verse) by nentwined

paint me a picture with countable stanzas, colors that rhyme directly and slant, paint me a plot that stands up for itself, or a moment in time inherently deep; paint me the lines that twist their own language, the form a bit playful, but in essence quite deep; paint me a picture that explains its own being, then takes that same being, and twists it around. paint me a poem that's naked when clothed, with innocent yang and experienced yin, make it sing loudly the chords of the soul and paint it again, and again, and again.

INTRANSIT 13-Nov-03/1:46 PM
thanks man. My confidence waxes and wanes faster than the sun and moon in their chase.

(ok, so why wasn't THAT in my bag six hundred poems ago)?




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