Shuushin13 Nov 2003

Reads pretty good, actually. Sometimes those wings can give a pre-impression.

Couple crits for you, if you are so inclined.

a comma after "decency" would work well overall, methinks

nest-[sites]? or were you making a play on "nasty"; either way.

"bust seats"? what is that? bus seats? if the "nest-sties" was intentional, then I'd believe this was too.

The last two lines are - perfect.