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guilty mind (Free verse) by Angel_of_fait

I'm going to take a shower be out in a hour lay your head on the bed sleep with the dead, curl up in a ball like your ma.Let it be said that your dead. barried alive inside your head. Bind the world barrie the sea float up to heaven just ot be with me. Let it be said that i am just in your head. To make you pay for what u said To make you pay for what u did To make you pay for what u are then u shall be dead again and then i shall win. Victoria Shanelle Nixon

heartlessempath 11-Nov-03/10:45 AM
I don't want to be harsh, but you've got a few serious spelling errors, and it's just not good form to use "u" instead of "you". I would suggest that you run this through spell checker, and... redo the formatting. The lines would flow better if you said "Lay your head on the bed,
Sleep with the dead" instead of keeping that all one line. Granted, that's just my opinion, but I would consider doing those things and then reposting it.




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