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paint me a poem with pictures (Lyric) by nentwined

Picture me a poem with the paint of a mind, give me a beauty that will last throughout time, rhyme me a reason to forestall all doubt, dribble me words to sustain me through drought.

NoSage 10-Nov-03/4:43 PM
Yes, Sliver has brought me kindof up to date on that, I just found out today that he writes and I was pleasantly surprised with a few of his. What do you think of finishing the poem with /sustain me throughout/then find a way to change L2?




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