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paint me a poem with pictures (Lyric) by nentwined

Picture me a poem with the paint of a mind, give me a beauty that will last throughout time, rhyme me a reason to forestall all doubt, dribble me words to sustain me through drought.

Shuushin 10-Nov-03/2:33 PM
WHAT A PIECE OF CRAP!!

(actually, I only said that to give you a sense of balance - it has a light feeling to it, and a very nice cadence, that wins over any feelings of 'easy' rhyme).

Maybe could do with replacing the word "rhyme" - but, really it's fine as is.




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