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paint me a poem with pictures (Lyric) by nentwined

Picture me a poem with the paint of a mind, give me a beauty that will last throughout time, rhyme me a reason to forestall all doubt, dribble me words to sustain me through drought.

INTRANSIT 10-Nov-03/6:23 AM
Call me wierd. I like it as is. It makes sense to me. It's just a request from a reader to a poet for some things. It works. But I don't like (dribble) . trickle , maybe. Dribble makes me think of infirm people.




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