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caught in the dark (Free verse) by http://fenechia.com

Im sitting as if im in a closet and I can't turn on the light. I reach for the light switch, but realize I can't get up You would think I would be afraid, shouting and screaming for help. Is the dark really that bad I ask you? Its a peaceful place, a peaceful thought. The dark. I can hit that switch at anytime and then I would be able to see that person in that mirror. There is know mirror, so Im not able to see that image. Who is in the dark. Do you really know. Do I really know..

Jeremi B. Handrinos 9-Nov-03/4:57 AM
I love how you tease yourself with the thought of you even casting a reflection to judge yourself this shrewdly in the first place.




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