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advice (Free verse) by ThePariahDog

listen to me hearken to my words i speak the truth and shepherd the herds to better lives beyond what you know so, into your mind i will sow all the necessary wisdoms and learnings in life whereas love is concerned to take an adequate wife believe me for i speak from experience with these words i give you deliverance

<{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Nov-03/5:06 PM
If you paid a guy to read this in a drunk Irish accent? I'd pay to see it. My favourite was "Hearken".
I, for one, had to read the bible several times whilst I was at the private boys shavery. Forced to sing beautiful Psalms in their entireties. Lord, it was a bore, but I believe your mentally retarded approach to preaching (great gimmick by the way) is much better. Because, it really speaks to the underdogs. The mistreated people of a lower more depraved caste in our indifferent society. The illiterate.




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