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I Hate You (Free verse) by mytenderrage

I despise you. You took my heart, And ripped it in to shreds. Until there was nothing left. I detest you. You stabbed my chest Until my blood flowed out Into a puddle of crimson Beneath my aching figure. Until there was a hole Of emptiness within My abused body, Helpless and hopeless, Cold and dead. You had offered me warmth, But I was so na??ve. I believed you. I wanted you. I did not anticipate All this pain All this hurt. You went away With hardly a farewell. How dare you go And leave me all alone? I am so lonely, I need someone. I hate you, I hate you. You hurt me the most When you didn???t mean to. I hate you, I hate you. You left my life forever, With barely a farewell. I hate you, I hate you. I hate you because I love you.

mama_chalupa 3-Aug-02/4:17 PM
Raven, sweetheart, its vanessa. all these dikwads who are critiquing your poem don't know you or your situation, so don't give a rats ass about their opinions. i mean, if they went to that high school that you thankfully got away from, they would be a little more humble. so fuck them. thats what i say. :) . oh yea, and about the poem, im sure i've written something just like it before too. and its probably posted on my webpage somewhere. but if you didn't want to hear the inane comments of a moronic peanut gallery (dark angel), then why did you post it here? i suggest an aromatherapy bath and to get back to austin where you belong :). next time im in town ill let you know and we can go get coffee somewhere.

peace.




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