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A Fractured Egg Shell (Free verse) by newdawnfades

A fractured egg shell has fallen from my hands. It could not hold things together. The drop was too high, too sudden for a fractured egg shell. It lays in pieces no longer one whole egg shell. A fractured egg shell lies shattered, motionless, its life filling the cracks in the floor.

newdawnfades 31-Oct-03/9:21 AM
I don't think our outlook is too different. I think we have alot of common ground spiritually speaking and there is no doubt to me that emotions are the fundamental building blocks to poetry and everything else that gives us meaning in this life. Emotion is everything to me. I am sorry to have offended you. Just so you know, I only tease the people who I find interesting and worthwhile.




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