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A Fractured Egg Shell (Free verse) by newdawnfades

A fractured egg shell has fallen from my hands. It could not hold things together. The drop was too high, too sudden for a fractured egg shell. It lays in pieces no longer one whole egg shell. A fractured egg shell lies shattered, motionless, its life filling the cracks in the floor.

newdawnfades 31-Oct-03/8:26 AM
I didn't trivialise your emotions. I was taking a friendly stab at you. I appreciated all your thoughts, but we can only be ourselves, not how you want us to be. I would suggest to you to do a little less directing and have more patience with responses of others. We don't all see the world in the same light. Some people are more serious, others have more of a balance. I've got a sense of humor. That doesn't mean I don't take people seriously, it just means life shouldn't be taken too seriously.




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