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Things Are Going to be Different Next Year (Lyric) by JanieDoe

She walked down the hall Of empty billboards and yellowing walls Silently observing Vacant locker doors ajar Swinging in the still air unmarred Cleaned out Sheets of schoolwork Floating like the gloating smirk Of the last word They have moved on Flew past twelfth grade, then gone Onto college

JanieDoe 1-Aug-02/7:04 PM
=D ur comments make me smile every time. amusing how persistent some ppl are at critisizing (sp?) ur poetry when u havent even glanced at theirs. im sure ur a top notch writer minus the ego. im off to watch hk movies now! ttyl.
o yea and be sure to check out this song. great stress reliever: Jay Chow -kai bu liao kou




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