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Things Are Going to be Different Next Year (Lyric) by JanieDoe

She walked down the hall Of empty billboards and yellowing walls Silently observing Vacant locker doors ajar Swinging in the still air unmarred Cleaned out Sheets of schoolwork Floating like the gloating smirk Of the last word They have moved on Flew past twelfth grade, then gone Onto college

JanieDoe 1-Aug-02/4:46 PM
u can give me all the plains on that continent if u want. i dont really read it. if u want ur comments to make an impact u should keep them short and sweet. and sushi-wonder spas? hm... please tell me more about that, im interested.




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