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rainfall saga 1 (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

smile lure fingers fingers rainthunderingrain rain thundering thundering rain rain rain rain rain weave rainfallweave rainfall thundering at last thundering rainfall rainfall at last

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 24-Oct-03/6:42 AM
Oh my, the locations of instances of 'rain' have similar properties to the locations of actual raindrops. INCREDIBLE!




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