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Go On a Business Trip (Free verse) by abecedarian

Brazil, France, Germany, Japan Spent several days each place To feel each in turn to feel the others No vacation I was on a business trip Auf Geschäftsreise That what business may lead To know thyself To know the rest Brings stronger allies New markets to explore A vision of the future And you within it Forget vacation A broken promise in waiting Go on a business trip instead And you will come back New

richa 23-Oct-03/7:44 AM
Thats certainly how I read it, so the poem has certainly done its job(to follow on your metaphor)




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