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falling in with the wrong crowd.
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Free verse
) by
richa
The heart does not stop, when we stop listening to its beat, nor thoughts of the travelling man, though a diamond may cut his windscreen with light and for a moment take the pole of his gaze like a magnet.
richa
23-Oct-03/6:56 AM
I'm a bit confused myself.
The image is light, but I was thinking of a magpie flying across with a jewel reflecting the light.
The image is to tease the reader, a diamond cutting like on an industrial lathe/ no it is light like a diamond/ no the diamond exists but the light is what cuts.
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