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falling in with the wrong crowd. (Free verse) by richa

The heart does not stop, when we stop listening to its beat, nor thoughts of the travelling man, though a diamond may cut his windscreen with light and for a moment take the pole of his gaze like a magnet.

INTRANSIT 23-Oct-03/6:48 AM
If you have the alternate writing, I suggest you have them side by side and read both aloud and then decide. After your explanation, it makes more sense, particularly the first stan.
I wish everyone understood what I mean all the time, but poetry wouldn't be a challenge then.




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