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falling in with the wrong crowd. (Free verse) by richa

The heart does not stop, when we stop listening to its beat, nor thoughts of the travelling man, though a diamond may cut his windscreen with light and for a moment take the pole of his gaze like a magnet.

richa 23-Oct-03/6:40 AM
About people having a basic humanity to themselves behind the diktats of the environment (a metaphor)

Wanted to put a bit about a senile old woman (always looking into the light to carry on the metaphor). And how she would look after cats or the like though she had no memory of why.




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