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Slayer Sucks (Free verse) by peaceseeker

behind the slayer tour buses two males and one female a drunken girlfriend moaning "hey!" I yelled and crossed the busy two lane street after I saw him hit her head on a wall "can I talk to her?" I asked he said "please, do go ahead" she quickly attached herself to my arm and I led her away past police cars on the side of the street and he followed I said "he hurts you, doesn't he?" she said "we live two hours away and I hooked him and his friends up with beer and tickets but nothing ever makes him happy." standing next to me with his fingers pointed at my belly like a gun with eyes bulging he turned his indignance on me "this ain't your business" and "you don't know what's going on" and "you just took her side" I asked her if she was safe and she said "yes" and I tried to explain to him that this is what females do for one another but I had to leave then for all the yelling and unpredictability as much as I dislike the police I wish I had led her straight to a police cruiser.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Oct-03/3:44 PM
I saw Slayer in Lon-Don during the summer. Afterwards, I witnessed a young South American man excitedly shaking his friend and shouting about how ace he thought the concert was. That cancels out all the dullards, dunces, posers, buncombes, oldsters, youngsters, hipsters, holsters, s'mores and sega rallys that you may have encountered.




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