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ReplyTo a comment on My Chocolate F-9 by abecedarian.

god'swife22 Oct 2003

'thickness' sanded? How, does thickness sand? 4th stanza- 'everything' or the only thing?

The only thing left
between me and my chocolate f-9
is a month, and then finally
I'll hear her sing.

The unbearable urge to rush
is a disaster, waiting.
So patience for once,
do this right, just for once
as I should.