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My Chocolate F-9 (Free verse) by abecedarian

Spruce billets the top Maple the back, sides, and neck Thickness sanded the sides and sawn straight Bended the wood not too wet to break Joined the plates and carved for days And finally now it rings D sharp Just as it should Everything left is a month between me and my chocolate F-9 Until finally I can hear it sing The urge to rush is unbearable a disaster in waiting So patience and do this right Just as I should

god'swife 22-Oct-03/10:37 AM
'thickness' sanded? How, does thickness sand? 4th stanza- 'everything' or the only thing?

The only thing left
between me and my chocolate f-9
is a month, and then finally
I'll hear her sing.

The unbearable urge to rush
is a disaster, waiting.
So patience for once,
do this right, just for once
as I should.




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