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Life/Death (revised) (Free verse) by devotedwonder

Life Birds chirping Grass growing Babies crying Sun shining The world turning beautiful to breathe air Death Birds silent Grass dead Babies no longer crying Sun blackened The world is dying beautiful to breathe your last breath

==Doylum 1-Aug-02/8:49 AM
Poo/Wee(unrevised)

Poo/

Fart brewing/
Poo slurping/
crap shooting/
shit steaming/
the bowl is filling/
beautiful log to see/

Wee/

bowels filling/
piss steaming/
wee gleaming/
urine burning/
gentials hurting/
what did you put in that tea.




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