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glimpses (Free verse) by nentwined

Disposable needles in the evening, orange-bright for avoidance speak of dreams (avoided--injected--forgotten) Cold wind chills bones that think they're warm, and a smile rolls back into nothingness. At last the pain (life) and pleasure (life) blend, and she (for one moment) fears the confusion, then gives in-- she is gone. Pigeons nest against her body for some last vestige of warmth but leave in the silence of dawn. The city decomposes.

nentwined 22-Oct-03/5:26 AM
thanks; I hadn't considered that at all. :) very interesting. I was certainly going for *something* with "The city/decomposes". Or a couple of things. Hadn't made the leap to post-apocalyptic.




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